Theres alot of hard work here and i can see that your presentation model is of a very high standard along with story boards and poster all great , the only improvment i could see is in the lid of your product maybe it could be aittle more resolved and possibly incorperating a basic tool kit so those bolt holes could be made without a power drill .
I was very impressed on your appearance model. i took a close look of the model during class, every detail was very well done, good quality pray paint work! Even your concept posters are looking great! Nice rendering and arrangement! Overall I think you have created a marvelous piece.
Your little bucket hole is very good. Straight forward, does the job minimises the hygiene threats. One thing i dont know about if people would care about having this product, maybe through laziness, habits or even the lack of sanitary education.
The Model was immaculate, but we know this about ur model making by now. the idea is very good, and a good solution, to an obvious problem. Maybe a board with abit more diagram style information would have helped? The use of Bio plastic is a major plus, and environmental helper. Nice work julian.
After clearly reading the presentation posters the actual practility of this product would be very beneficial for that very problem in terms of deseases that come from poor hygiene systems . The model and the renders are very impressive, especcialy the model itself I like it alot. great job jullian looks like allot of work.
Theres alot of hard work here and i can see that your presentation model is of a very high standard along with story boards and poster all great , the only improvment i could see is in the lid of your product maybe it could be aittle more resolved and possibly incorperating a basic tool kit so those bolt holes could be made without a power drill .
ReplyDeleteI was very impressed on your appearance model. i took a close look of the model during class, every detail was very well done, good quality pray paint work! Even your concept posters are looking great! Nice rendering and arrangement! Overall I think you have created a marvelous piece.
ReplyDeleteYour little bucket hole is very good. Straight forward, does the job minimises the hygiene threats. One thing i dont know about if people would care about having this product, maybe through laziness, habits or even the lack of sanitary education.
ReplyDeleteThe Model was immaculate, but we know this about ur model making by now. the idea is very good, and a good solution, to an obvious problem. Maybe a board with abit more diagram style information would have helped? The use of Bio plastic is a major plus, and environmental helper. Nice work julian.
ReplyDeleteAfter clearly reading the presentation posters the actual practility of this product would be very beneficial for that very problem in terms of deseases that come from poor hygiene systems . The model and the renders are very impressive, especcialy the model itself I like it alot. great job jullian looks like allot of work.
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